# Revisions by Genre

## Informational prose

**Before:** The program marked a significant milestone in the evolving landscape of local education.

**After:** The program added evening classes for 84 adult learners in its first year.

Use the after only when the detail is verified. Otherwise ask for the consequence or cut the claim.

## Marketing copy

**Before:** Our platform empowers teams with a seamless, innovative experience.

**After:** Assign the review, see who owns it, and keep the decision with the work.

The revision names the user action instead of making a generic benefit claim.

## UX copy

**Before:** Unlock insights to elevate your workflow.

**After:** View this week’s review status.

Name the screen, object, or action. Let the surrounding interface carry the sales case.

## Teaching material

**Before:** This lesson highlights the importance of careful source evaluation.

**After:** Before you cite a source, check who made it, when it was updated, and what evidence it provides.

Turn a declared value into an actionable learner move.

## Creative prose

**Before:** Mara felt a profound sense of loss as the old house stood as a testament to the past.

**After:** Mara left the porch light on until dawn, though no one had lived there for years.

Use a concrete action only if it belongs to the author’s scene and intent; creative prose may choose telling instead.
